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Can someone read my Soul Eater fanfic. and help me with some ideas? I am kinda stuck again..

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snowcloud8 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Where's the fanfic?
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Dream-Paint Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
It's not posted online yet. If someone helps me I'll note them the work.
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snowcloud8 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Well I am both a fan of Soul Eater and a beta reader. What seems to be the problem??
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Dream-Paint Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I will need help with editing after I am done, but for now I need to figure out on how to continue the story. I shall note you the script.
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snowcloud8 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Sorry for taking so long to get back to you. Work's been long this week. So I briefed myself over both of your sent documents, but I am confused which one is more relevant and what exactly you need help on.
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Dream-Paint Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
One of the documents are just ideas jotted down and are not important yet. I just sent you that so you know what I am already planning ahead and so that can help you with deciding on how to continue the script. What I need help with is the continuation of the script. Like what should happen next.
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snowcloud8 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
But which document is the script? Furthermore, I already sort of see issues with your plot, hence why it's hard to write what comes next.
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Dream-Paint Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
If you read it, it should be pretty apparent. Scripts have the characters' lines in it, and I wrote about 6,700 words. Also, instead of saying I have issues with my plot, can you at least explain what the issues are? Because that doesn't help at all.
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